Friday, October 7, 2011

12 AM revision instructions

•write your shaping sheets into 2 BP's
•verify all CD's are set up correctly with developed lead-in's [ T, L, "Q" (#). ]
•get rid of all personal pronouns & no-no words in your comm
[would, should, could, may, might, probably, if, you, your, yours, I, me, mine, probably, if]
•get rid of all filler/weak phrases, such as...
... This _______ that, This paragraph..., This is a(n) _______ example of...
•Try to expand 2-3 comms w/ "because" or "therefore"
•Remove weak words like "very," "thing," "good," "bad," etc.
•reduce repeat words & repetitive phrases
•vary sentences-- don't start every comm with a noun like "Juror," "He," "They"

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